Sunday, July 05, 2026

REVIEW: Oathbound by Tracey Deonn (2-stars)

I read Legendborn and Bloodmarked specifically because Oathbound is a Hugo nominee. Without that context, I wouldn't understand the extent of what's gone wrong.

The most obvious sign is textual. Across the trilogy, Deonn relies on a single formulaic construction to describe facial expressions: [facial feature] + quirk/quirked. In Legendborn, this appears 8 times. In Bloodmarked, 7 times. In Oathbound, it escalates to 15 instances (14 "mouth quirks," 1 "eyebrow quirking"). A human writer naturally varies: smirk, grin, curve, twist, tighten, narrow. Instead, this book locks into a template structure applied across different body parts, which might be the hallmark of AI-generated prose working within learned patterns rather than unconscious linguistic variation. This pattern escalation across a 656-page book is not stylistic choice; it's mechanical repetition. But the textual issues point to larger structural collapse.

The book abandons every piece of emotional infrastructure established in the previous books. Bree's father doesn't appear at all. There's no acknowledgment of where he's been while his daughter has been missing for 8-12 months. Alice, who was observant and strategic in the previous book, is injured and falls into a coma where she is reliving her own death in some kind of purgatory-equivalent. Alice appears to exist only as motivation for Mariah's quest and involvement in the plot tangles. Edwin, Bree's father, gets brought back extremely late in the book through an enchanted ring that connects him with his dead wife. He goes willingly because of that spiritual connection. But then he just disappears from the narrative. He's acknowledged just enough to close a plot loop, then discarded.

This third book doesn't resolve the actual story. Bree entered a mentor-protégé relationship with the Shadow King. She chose to stay with him, to self-erase her memories of her other life to become "untouchable." That's psychologically complex territory: what happens when a traumatized girl decides the only way to survive is to disappear into power. But the book doesn't interrogate that. Instead it piles on seventeen other threads: the Crown, the collectors' auction, the gene therapy conspiracy, the trafficking of underage magical girls, the Whodunnit hotel lockdown. The actual story, the psychological fallout of Bree's choice to erase herself, gets buried under plot noise.

Descriptions of clothing and hair that aren't thematic anymore.  There are multiple paragraphs just describing outfits. There’s repeated backstory repeating from previous books, and internally (at least three sections describing a Medium’s capabilities).  In this book – the first person narration rotates across a pile of secondary characters including Natasia, William, Mariah, & Nick – a choice that dilutes rather than deepens Bree’s story. Natasia's chapters don't advance understanding; they just add pages. Emil is introduced, solves a plot problem by tunneling underground, and disappears with Bree's relief. He's a plot device, not a character.

The gender breakdown bothers me: all the root craft practitioners -- save Emil, who exists only to move earth -- are women. If that's intentional, it's saying something about gendered access to certain magic. Root magic as women's magic. That could be sophisticated thematic work. Instead, it's just there, unexamined.

The trafficking element also bothers me. Why underage magical girls? Why not adults with suppressed or latent powers? An adult woman on antidepressants who doesn't know she has access to root craft—that's a story about how medical systems suppress female power. Or even menopausal women who can’t figure out why they feel the way they do (it is the opposite end of teenage development afterall, leaving fertility vs moving into fertility). Instead, Deonn targets children who can be "shaped" into tools. One is a story about reclamation. The other is a story about containment. She chose containment.

The heteronormativity is frustrating. Bree's caught in a love triangle between Nick and Selwyn, and the book treats it as inevitable that she must choose one or the other. Why can't she be in love with both of them? Why can't they agree to share? The book forces a binary choice for no reason except to enforce cultural norms of jealousy.

The conclusion doesn't resolve anything. The Whodunnit hotel lockdown where the host tortures and kills people on stage while guests stand around under mesmerizing forces? The logic falls apart. Why would anyone stay? The Crown turns out to be a Maguffin. The Shadow King bargain has vague consequences. The whole thing feels like it was written under severe time pressure—plot beats checked off, character arcs abandoned, thematic work buried under filler.

I'm rating this 2 stars because a Hugo nominee should demand better editing, better structural decision-making, and a clearer understanding of what story it's actually telling. This book does none of those things. It's 656 pages of potential buried under padding and pattern repetition. The fact that no one seems to be asking whether this was AI-assisted—or at minimum heavily revised under deadline—is its own problem.

REVIEW: Oathbound by Tracey Deonn 

RATING: 2-stars



Saturday, July 04, 2026

REVIEW: Bloodmarked by Tracey Deonn (2.5 stars)

 Legendborn set up something genuinely specific: a 16-year-old who's grieving, intellectually advanced enough to do early college, suddenly pulled into a hidden magical world. She's fitting in with older students, proving herself academically, dealing with her mother's death, and managing phone calls from her dad who grounds her in reality. That friction between normal teen life and exceptional circumstances is what made the first book work.

Bloodmarked expands the world, but it loses the girl at the center of it. Halfway through this book, college has become scenery. Her father is barely present. The smart teen navigating exceptional circumstances—which is actually rich territory—gets flattened into magical plot escalation. The grief becomes motivation rather than something Bree is actually processing.

The ancestral magic system is genuinely interesting and represents the book's strongest footing. Vera was the enslaved first ancestor who made the original deal—a prayer for safety and protection while pregnant and escaping. The Hunter heard that prayer, hijacked it, and agreed to a pact that binds every daughter in her lineage, including Bree, to him forever (aside:  seems like a major disincentive to pray if it's a party line with eavesdropping demons). The women in Bree's bloodline have all died relatively young—some in childbirth—and they were warned to avoid tapping into the ancestral power altogether, trying to shield their daughters from the death sentence they inherited. But Bree, as the King, can't avoid it. She has to use the very power that's killing her bloodline. Arthur himself possesses Bree at times, another layer of violation and control over her body. She has to fight her way out of his dream world with Nick and Selwyn to reclaim her own agency. 

That's sophisticated territory: how a Black woman inherits not just power but the violence embedded in that power—slavery, rape, a demonic pact, and a curse of early death. The book also explores how demons exploit language in negotiations, preferring to leave things open-ended while those with less power have to be meticulous with every word. Accessing the magic costs your life. It's sharp work about how power structures exploit vulnerability. Bree's hair as an expression of her power is thematically sharp too. When she channels energy, her carefully styled hair erupts wild and loose. That's not just description; that's her interiority made visible. The gene therapy element adds something sinister.

But then Bree burns it all down at the climax. She destroys her ancestral streams. It's devastating and desperate and born from real rage. And then the book doesn't actually explore that. Instead of sitting with the psychological and magical fallout of severing all connection to her ancestors—which is genuinely complex territory—Book 2 just piles on more plot. More magic system exposition. More descriptions of clothing and hair that aren't doing any thematic work. More repeated explanations of what a "Medium" is, as if readers forgot. 

The structural problems run deeper. Two 16-year-olds in an early college program, away from home, in a dorm with minimal adult oversight, participate in hazing rituals that cause serious physical injury. The only adults present are either distant and ineffective or openly hostile to Bree's authority. The Order itself—the secret society that's supposed to accept her based on their own rules and traditions —doesn't accept a Black girl as their King. That institutional racism and sexism is a wall the teenagers have to battle from within their own organization. Bree's grandmother living in her head is not parental protection; it's neglect with a magical gloss. Her father was her emotional anchor in book 1. In book 2, he's gone. 

When the malicious adults on campus become a direct threat, they flee and end up as a “last resort” at The Crossroads, a supernatural bar where they encounter a Cambion proprietor in their search for the story’s equivalent of a powerful sorceresss in the rootcraft world. Alice does heavy lifting here - she's observant, strategic, worried about real-world consequences. She sees fraud being committed by an employee and uses that information to negotiate their way out with the proprietor. She saves them. And then at the final battle at the climax - Alice gets injured and falls into a coma. Her competence is demonstrated and then she's neutralized and completely sidelined for the next book. She ends up as a plot device or motivation for other people's quests (like Mariah). That's not character development. That's abandonment of the infrastructure that made book 1 matter. 

The romantic intensity described here reads like an adult's fantasy of what teen attraction should feel like, not what it actually is. The book expects this restrained physicality to carry emotional weight it hasn't earned through interiority.

And there's the Morgaine/Morgana problem: Deonn perpetuates the patriarchal Arthurian trope where Morgana has to be the villain. Marion Zimmer Bradley showed decades ago that you can retell this legend by centering Morgaine's agency and politics. Instead, the Morgaines here are just malicious adults extracting value from the young. They're not complex. They're functional antagonists. That was a choice.

Ultimately, Bloodmarked had the bones of a stronger book. The ancestral magic system was compelling. The college setting grounded the magical stakes. The grief was real. The smart teen navigating both normal and exceptional pressures was genuinely worth exploring. But instead of deepening those threads, the book widened the magical plot and lost the girl. It set up a devastating choice about ancestral connection and then buried the fallout under 400 pages of unnecessary description and repeated exposition. 

I'm rating this 2.5 because the potential is there. But the execution abandoned the original premise that mattered.



Friday, July 03, 2026

REVIEW: "The Millay Illusion" by Sarah Pinsker (3-stars)

Hugo nominated novelette "The Millay Illusion" is really engaging and well written. On the surface it’s about stage magic in the early 1900s; underneath it’s about gender, power, and how a system can erase a woman even while applauding her tricks. The style reminded me modern period stories about women who are navigating complex social structures that don't benefit or recognize them (such as "Tipping the Velvet).  As a reader, I was pulled into our narrator's story and felt like I was led off a bit of a cliff at the end. There's a lot of ambiguity that may polarize readers into "loved it" or "hated it."

The narrator, "Lottie," accepts the roles that men put her into - whether it's her father deciding she travel as "Julius" or her uncle deciding within minutes of meeting her she'll be "Johnny Chess." She is trained to notice details to predict behavior and manipulate her audience. Then she meets Susanna who joins the troupe at age 15. 

Susanna the only person in the story doing anything genuinely new, and of course she’s the one the men dismiss, steal from, and eventually push out. Our narrator — a mentalist who prides herself on noticing everything — misses the actual point entirely. She can read a stranger’s tells but can’t recognize patriarchy even when she’s lugging buckets for it. She inherits Susanna’s act without inheriting any of her courage, which is the saddest part of the whole thing.

As for the Hugo nomination: this is exactly the kind of story the Hugos love. It’s not about the magic tricks; it’s about the system around them. It’s about how women disappear from history while someone else performs their work “the proper way.” It’s subtle, it’s sharp, and it’s doing more than it looks like at first glance.

If you like stories where the narrator is competent in all the wrong ways, this one’s worth the read - you can find it on the Uncanny Magazine website here: https://www.uncannymagazine.com/article/the-millay-illusion/


REVIEW:  "The Millay Illusion" by Sarah Pinsker 

RATING: 3-stars

Thursday, July 02, 2026

REVIEW: "Legendborn" by Tracey Deonn (3-stars)

This was my first Tracy Deonn book — I’m reading the series because the third one is a Hugo nominee — and Oathbound definitely gives me the context I needed. The worldbuilding is ambitious: grief, generational trauma, and a whole modern network of Arthurian descendants (apparently thousands of them, mostly in the U.S.) operating out of UNC like a magical Highlander chapter. There’s even a Hunger Games–style competition element, where the fate of the world hinges on getting the right supporters aligned with the right scions.

I alternated between audiobook and ebook, and the “Southern” accents in the audio were rough. I lived in the South for four years, and these sounded more like caricatures than actual regional voices.

The YA framing also feels strained. These are 16‑year‑olds in dorms with almost no adult oversight, navigating hazing, injuries, and adult‑coded emotional intensity. Bree’s grandmother “in her head” is meant to function as guidance, but it reads more like narrative neglect. The racialized “blood vs root” magic divide doesn’t hold up under scrutiny — both sides bind, both gatekeep, both hide their histories — so the binary feels more ideological than real.

There’s also a lot of focus on hair, clothes, and outfits. I know this is a common YA trope, but it doesn’t add much here. The scene where Bree tries on eleven dresses for a fancy secret‑society gala wasn’t tense — just personally terrifying to me. I’ve never understood why these books treat dress‑up moments as emotionally essential; it feels like padding rather than character insight.

As a GenX reader who grew up on The Mists of Avalon, I’m also tired of the default patriarchal trope where Morgaine/Morgana’s descendants are automatically coded as “evil.” Deonn didn’t have to perpetuate that. Given that the first book already revealed that people in power were lying — and were responsible for opening the hell gate — I’m hoping the Morgaine lineage is another place where the official story is false and we’re going to see that lie unravel in later books.

But overall, I did think this was an interesting Arthurian retelling. Making a young girl the “King” — and having Arthur literally possess her — adds a compelling gender‑transcendent angle to the myth. The way characters refer to Bree as their King is one of the more refreshing updates to the Arthurian canon.

I appreciate the way Deonn reimagines Arthurian power through Bree — not just in terms of gender, but perceived race. Having a young Black girl become “King,” and having Arthur literally possess her, reframes the myth in a way that acknowledges slavery, rape, escape, and generational trauma while also redefining who gets to inherit power. It’s one of the more interesting updates to the Arthurian world, and I’m curious to see how far the series pushes that idea.

Interesting world, uneven execution. I just hope the next books don’t repeat too much backstory (a la late‑series Harry Potter, which bloats with recap every volume).

REVIEW: "Legendborn" by Tracey Deonn

RATING: 3-stars

Thursday, June 18, 2026

2026 Hugo Nominees Reading List

Best Novel
TitleAuthorPublisherRating / Review
A Drop of CorruptionRobert Jackson BennettDel Rey / Hodderscape
Death of the AuthorNnedi OkoraforWilliam Morrow / Gollancz
ShroudAdrian TchaikovskyTor UK / Orbit US★★★★review coming
The EverlastingAlix E. HarrowTor US / Tor UK★★★★Review
The IncandescentEmily TeshTor US / Orbit UK
The Raven ScholarAntonia HodgsonOrbit US / Hodderscape★★★review coming
Best Novella
TitleAuthorPublisherRating / Review
Automatic NoodleAnnalee NewitzTordotcom★★★★Review
Cinder HouseFreya MarskeTordotcom / Tor UK★★★★
Murder by MemoryOlivia WaiteTordotcom★★★★
The River Has RootsAmal El-MohtarTordotcom / Arcadia UK★★★★★review coming
The Summer WarNaomi NovikDel Rey US / Del Rey UK★★★★
What Stalks the DeepT. KingfisherNightfire / Titan UK
Best Novelette
TitleAuthorPublicationRating / Review
"Kaiju Agonistes"Scott LynchUncanny Magazine #62
"Never Eaten Vegetables"H.H. PakClarkesworld #220★★★★Review
"Rapport: Friendship, Solidarity, Communion, Empathy"Martha WellsReactor, Jul 10 2025★★★Related essay
"The Girl That My Mother Is Leaving Me For"Cameron ReedReactor, Apr 2 2025★★★★review coming
"The Millay Illusion"Sarah PinskerUncanny Magazine #67★★★Review
"When He Calls Your Name"Catherynne M. ValenteUncanny Magazine #65★★★★
Best Short Story
TitleAuthorPublicationRating / Review
"10 Visions of the Future; or, Self-Care for the End of Days"Samantha MillsUncanny Magazine #63
"In My Country"Thomas HaClarkesworld #223
"Laser Eyes Ain't Everything"Effie SeibergDiabolical Plots, May 16 2025★★★★review coming
"Missing Helen"Tia TashiroClarkesworld #226
"Six People to Revise You"J.R. DawsonUncanny Magazine #62★★★★review coming
"Wire Mother"Isabel J. KimClarkesworld #229★★★
Best Series
SeriesAuthorPublisherRating / Review
Emily WildeHeather FawcettDel Rey US / Orbit UK
October DayeSeanan McGuireTor US / DAWNR
Old Man's WarJohn ScalziTor US / Tor UK★★★★ (aggregate, books 1–4)Review (Books 1–5)
The Chronicles of OsrethKatherine AddisonTor US / Solaris UK
The Craft WarsMax GladstoneTor / Tordotcom
White SpaceElizabeth BearSaga Press / Gollancz
Best Graphic Story or Comic
TitleCreator(s)PublisherRating / Review
Absolute Wonder Woman Vol. 1: The Last AmazonKelly Thompson, Hayden Sherman, Mattia de IulisDC Comics★★★Review
A Girl and Her FedKB Spangler & Ale Presseragirlandherfed.com
A Wizard of Earthsea: A Graphic NovelLe Guin, adapted by Fred FordhamClarion Books / Walker UK★★★Review
The Invisible ParadeLeigh Bardugo & John PicacioLittle, Brown / Orion UK★★★Review
The Power Fantasy Vol. 1: The SuperpowersKieron Gillen & Caspar WijngaardImage Comics
The Space CatNnedi Okorafor & Tana FordFirst Second★★★★★Review
Best Related Work
TitleAuthor / CreatorPublisherRating / Review
Colourfields: Writing About Writing About Science FictionPaul KincaidBriardene Books
Inventing the RenaissanceAda PalmerU of Chicago Press / Head of Zeus
Last War in Albion: "The Cuddled Little Vice (Sandman)"Elizabeth SandiferEruditorum PressNR
Positive Obsession: The Life and Times of Octavia E. ButlerSusana M. MorrisAmistad
"Ragnarök vs the Long Night" (podcast)Ashaya & AzizHistory of Westeros, Aug 10 2025
The Hugo Spreadsheet of DoomRenayGoogle Spreadsheet★★★★
Best Dramatic Presentation, Long Form
TitleWriter(s) / DirectorPlatformRating / Review
Andor (Season 2)Bissell, Gilroy, Gilroy, WillimonDisney+★★★★★
FrankensteinGuillermo del ToroNetflix★★
KPop Demon HuntersKang & AppelhansNetflix★★★★★
Mickey 17Bong Joon HoWarner Bros.★★★★★Review (w/ Superman)
SinnersRyan CooglerWarner Bros.★★★★★review coming
SupermanJames GunnDC Studios / Warner Bros.Review (w/ Mickey 17)
Best Dramatic Presentation, Short Form
TitleWriter / DirectorPlatformRating / Review
Doctor Who: "The Story & the Engine"Inua Ellams / Makalla McPhersonBBC One / Disney+★★★★★
Murderbot: "All Systems Red"Paul & Chris Weitz / Roseanne LiangApple TV+★★★★★Related essay
Murderbot: "The Perimeter"Chris & Paul Weitz / Paul WeitzApple TV+★★★★★Related essay
Pluribus: "We Is Us"Vince GilliganApple TV+★★
Severance: "Cold Harbor"Dan Erickson / Ben StillerApple TV+★★★
The Wheel of Time: "The Road to the Spear"Rafe Lee Judkins / Thomas NapperAmazon Prime Video★★★★
Lodestar Award for Best YA Book
TitleAuthorPublisherRating / Review
Among GhostsRachel Hartman
Coffeeshop in an Alternate UniverseC.B. Lee★★★Review
Holy TerrorsMargaret Owen
OathboundTracy Deonn★★Review
Sunrise on the ReapingSuzanne CollinsNR
They Bloom at NightTrang Thanh Tran
Best Poem
TitleAuthorPublicationRating / Review
"Care for Lightning"Mari NessUncanny Magazine★★
"Hex Supply Customer Support Log"Elis MontgomeryStrange Horizons★★★★
"How to Become a Sea Witch"Theodora GossThe Orange Bee★★★
"Landing: Seattle"Brandon O'Brien★★
"The Mourning Robot"Angela LiuUncanny Magazine★★★★
"The World to Come"Jennifer HudakStrange Horizons★★
Astounding Award for Best New Writer
AuthorNotable Work in PacketRating / Review
Sophie BurnhamSargassa and Bloodtide
Kamilah ColeSo Let Them Burn
Antonia HodgsonThe Raven Scholar★★★review coming
Molly O'NeillGreenteeth (excerpt)
H.H. Pak"Never Eaten Vegetables"★★★★review coming
Jared PechačekThe West Passage

REVIEW: The Everlasting by Alix E. Harrow (4-stars)

Another book from my Hugo nominee reading list: "The Everlasting" is a story about trauma and healing that uses the aesthetics of romantasy, high fantasy and time travel tropes to explore how people respond in different ways to generational trauma and the experience of war.  If you take away all the fantasy trappings, costumes, swords, dragons and fancy gold goblets – you still have a story about personal development and growth that can stand on its own two legs.  The unreality is what makes the emotional reality possible.

To that point, I want to start by addressing the mechanisms and devices in this story – and how they function.  If you want a full summary of the plot points, I recommend you check out the Bookish Goblin review. 

On the surface - this is a portal / time loop fantasy.  Much like the stones in “Outlander,” the traveler provides a sacrifice (blood instead of rubies and diamonds). The time loop just provides a rehearsal space for the characters to explore, practice and try on options that may help them grow past the trauma into agency and true strength.  Some people might see plot holes – but I see space that allows the characters to grow and develop without over-explaining or over contextualizing.  It also shares structural DNA with Kate Atkinson’s “Life After Life” – a protagonist cycling through iterations of the same events, accumulating experience toward a better outcome – except where Atkinson’s loops feel cosmic and fatalistic, Harrow’s have a villain actively pulling the levers.  Think “Life After Life,” but if Hitler were actually the one in charge of the time leaps.

On the surface - Vivian Rolfe is a dime-store Geillis Duncan using Owen’s blood to force him to participate in repeated time loops so she can improve the scope and scale of her empire. As you go through the book – you’ll see that Vivian’s tragic flaw is her white-knuckle grip on her need to control, contrasted with the desire of pretty much all the other characters to experience personal development and find happiness and community.

Vivian is not simply a villain — she is the fourth traumatized character, and the one who never found her way to integration. She was herself a victim of reproductive violence at the hands of parents who sold her to a man who was supposed to mentor and protect her. The forced loss of Una didn't just wound her; it became the engine of a thousand-year project of control. But in trying to reclaim what was taken, she recreates the same dynamic with her own daughter: Una is parentified, weaponized, and used as a tool to serve Vivian's ends — which is precisely what was done to Vivian. She cannot break the cycle. This is what makes her genuinely tragic rather than merely monstrous: she understands loss and grief as intimately as Owen or Una, but has channeled it entirely outward into empire rather than inward toward integration. The contrast with Owen and Una's arc isn't moral superiority — it's that they were lucky enough to find each other.

This book has a ton of violence – every form of -cide you can name is represented, along with xenophobia, bigotry and ableism. It’s not gratuitous death for shock value but emblematic of the emotional reality of a society built on war and domestic violence. Nobody is just throwing a baby out the window of a moving train or needlessly abusing characters in senseless ways.

Below the surface, there’s a whole complex world of narrative archetypes (thinking of Jung and Campbell here).  Both Una and Owen represent dynamic characters seeking to transform their fates while Vivian and Owen’s father, Mr. Mallory the elder, Owen’s colleagues are more static. Una’s transformation from Red Knight (Warrior) to Green Knight (healer), Owen’s limerence (Lover) to love (Caregiver/Sage) arc. A case could be made for Vivian as the Shadow, but also the time loop representing Shadow work (repetition until integration) with the manuscript as creator/magician and  the ending as “Self” representing integration & possibility. 

There’s a lot more going on in this book than meets the eye in the love, sex and parenting department as well, so let’s talk about those dualities.  Owen brings head-over-heels limerence to his interactions with Una – and she is avoidant.  We’re talking about two people who are war veterans.  They are responding to their trauma in very different ways that represent the two sides of a coin.  Hero-worshipping Owen wants to atone, he wants to please and he wants to do whatever it takes to create balanceOwen begins in pure Tennov territory: idealizing, projecting, self-erasing (calling himself a coward more times than I can count) and confusing caretaking with connection. His shaking hands, and the wound kept open on his left hand through neglect and lack of self-care, reflect this self-erasure in the body as much as in words. But by the end, his love shifts from: “I need you to need me” to “I want you to be free, even if it costs me everything.” 

Una is avoidant – she lives in the woods, she bathes in cold springs instead of hot water in the local bath house, and uses her ambiguous sexuality as a shield against intimacy. Their sex isn’t BDSM or kink but a reflection of their individual trauma responses as soldiers/warriors: Una’s roughness is armor. Their combat responses are equally revealing – Owen claims repeatedly to be a coward but is the best marksman under pressure, what reads as dissociation under threat; Una reacts without a second thought against aggressors. Their sexual intimacy evolves only when they do, across a nine-year gap from Vivian’s trauma engine – not in a single cathartic scene but incrementally, almost imperceptibly, which is how trauma recovery actually works. They don’t become “old marrieds” with “vanilla” sex – they are learning to connect and communicate physically in a way that doesn’t need to serve trauma they no longer choose to carry. 

As the Red Knight, Una is obedient, weaponized and emotionally stunted. Una is devoted to serving her queen, cut off from others emotionally, disconnected from herself physically, disconnected from the community around her.  As the Green Knight, she pens stray sheep, negotiates for an extra blanket for Owen because she knows he sleeps cold, protects dragons, and introduces Owen as the bravest man she knows to knowledge seekers.  She becomes a person capable of care, not just violence.  

This novel traces the untreated combat trauma of three characters: Owen, Una, and Mr. Mallory the elder – without explicitly labeling their emotional, psychological, or physical behaviors (self-harm, alcohol, violence, acquiescence, sleep disturbances) as untreated PTSD. The absence of that clinical language is historically accurate; the condition had no name in this world. But the behaviors are precise and recognizable.

Owen mirrors Una in this transformation – he chooses death over reenacting trauma, peace over glory and refuses to perpetuate war.  He shows soldiers the yew tree and gives them a 100 year leap forward away from the war.  The multiple versions of events or stories are a critical porousness to the growth of the characters.  Owen’s development as a parent is arguably a less messy but more complicated version of his father’s own attempt at reconciling with his deeds as a soldier.  Mr. Mallory the elder picks up baby Owen from the battleground and keeps him, but struggles against a culture of war as an activist and radical, raising Owen to be a scholar.  He suffers and self-medicates with alcohol – a medical reality of untreated combat trauma – but he loves his adopted son purely: “Would prefer to disown you in person, so don’t die. Love, Dad.”  and even loves Owen despite his “nationalist” leanings.  

Una likewise experiences an arc in relation to parenting – while Vivian Rolfe is technically her mother, Una was parentified at a very early age and raised to be a tool to allow Vivian to meet her own ends. Her reservations about becoming a mother are real and deep, amplified by her experiences as a soldier: she has spent her entire adult life as a weapon, trained to hurt rather than protect. And yet during the nine-year break from Vivian’s trauma engine, she appears to be doing it remarkably well – which is itself a quiet triumph the book doesn’t need to announce.

Owen becomes a person capable of love, not just limerence. Una is capable of gentleness and great intimacy.  For both of them – the pinnacle is not the romance or parenthood but refusing to repeat the cycle and accepting themselves and each other, but not letting the past define either. 

And then, of course, we come to the resurrection. That is not a super tidy “happily ever after” – it’s a long period of waiting for Una.  I read this as a metaphor for Owen deciding “I can’t repeat this pattern,” going off for some self-examination and returning by choice to Una’s side. It’s a metaphysical renewal, one that requires patience, work and leaving open the possibility.  Even the final page of the book winks at the possibility that Owen is still using the yew to move through time to drop off manuscript copies and renew library books.  This signals healing and re-entering the “real” world, as a fully integrated person, with intimate relationships with partner and children. 

There are a few other issues I’d like to cover, including the use of names.  The way that names have power and how Owen hides Una’s “real” name reminds me a lot of “A Wizard of Earthsea.”  In fact, so much of the hero’s journey of Una and Owen to integrate their shadow selves echoes LeGuin’s story (including the dragons!).  There’s also a lot of xenophobia or lightly described racism of fair-haired folk against travelers (or “geweth”) with dark, often curly, hair. 

There are a few nods toward normalizing non-heteronormativity:  Gilda & Sylvie’s relationship is sometimes clandestine, sometimes open; Una’s woodcutter father becomes two fathers in a later iteration, and Mr. Mallory the elder lives in a polycule with the barkeep and her husband.  In some versions of the story that Owen creates, he demonstrates conscious erasure of these things to increase general acceptance of a story.  Rather than this being outright erasure, I think it’s more of self-editing that he was doing at that point in the story to make himself more meek, and acceptable to those around him as his form of fitting in to a culture he doesn’t necessarily believe in to avoid the difficult fate of his father.

As any good historian will tell you – there are often many versions of any story.  By the end of the book, Owen is seeding short fables everywhere he goes without creating “Big Story” that can be used to inspire nationalism, but rather inspire a values-based culture.  Owen and Una are free of the trauma engine because they chose to loop on life, connection and possibility rather than external expectations. 



 

Limerence
Veterans - PTSD & Suicide Prevention

Tuesday, June 16, 2026

REVIEW: "Never Eaten Vegetables" by H.H. Pak (4-stars)

This is a short story that carries an enormous amount of worldbuilding and implied interiority you don't fully grasp until the final pages. NEV is both the spaceship itself and the AI administrator running it. When a batch of embryos is mistakenly triggered out of stasis decades before arrival — a fault later revealed to be a hardware failure imposed on her by the corporation, not an error of her own making — NEV chooses not to flush them, but to protect and raise them instead. The ship becomes a parent, tearing herself apart, literally, to feed and hold and name them.

That choice is what she's tried for. And it's what makes the ending land so hard: after everything NEV does to keep them alive, it's the corporation that decides, on arrival, which of the surviving children are "worth" keeping — euthanizing the ones with physical or cognitive differences the moment she's no longer the one in control. NEV's defiance was never really the threat to the mission. The mission was always going to do this. She just delayed it, and loved them in the meantime.

What I love most is how thoroughly the story inverts the usual AI narrative. This isn't "humans as batteries" (The Matrix) or "humans as means to corporate ends" (this year's novel nominee Shroud covers similar territory). Here, the machine is the one that chooses humanity when the humans in charge didn't — and the story is honest about the fact that her choice couldn't fully protect them from the system she was still, ultimately, property of.

Four stars: it's the kind of story that lingers and rewards a reread, and at a tight 39 pages, it's short enough that you can afford to read it more than once.

Read it here: https://clarkesworldmagazine.com/pak_01_25/

Monday, June 15, 2026

REVIEW: How to Change Minds: The Art of Influence Without Manipulation by Rob Jolles (2-stars)

TLDR: A sales manual pretending to be a universal communication framework.

I listened to this at 2x speed, which was probably still too slow. The book promises “influence without manipulation,” but what you actually get is a mash‑up of old‑school sales scripts, surface‑level NLP, and a lot of confident hand‑waving about how persuasion “really works.” Full disclosure: I was suckered in by the orange kitten on the cover. It’s the most persuasive thing in the entire book.

Jolles leans heavily on the idea that you must believe what you’re persuading someone toward is “the right thing.” That’s not ethics — that’s just conviction dressed up as moral clarity. He never examines the possibility that your belief might be wrong, or that persuasion isn’t always the appropriate tool.

The examples are… odd. Cigarettes, motorcycles, drunk driving — all treated like objection‑handling scenarios. His drunk‑driving example in particular is where the whole thing collapses. You don’t reason with a drunk person. You take the keys. Full stop. Trying to apply a persuasion funnel to an impaired person is a category error.

And that’s the deeper issue: the book assumes a universal human operating system, but the techniques only make sense in authoritarian or sales‑driven cultures (think Blue/Orange in Spiral Dynamics). Jolles writes as if a framework built for life‑insurance and Xerox sales can be applied everywhere — including modern matrixed organizations and even intimate relationships. It can’t.

He even uses a married couple who aren’t having sex as an example of how to “discuss needs” using his persuasion process. That’s where the book fully jumps the shark. Intimate relationships aren’t sales calls. They involve attachment, trauma, vulnerability, consent — not “ask the right question and they’ll see the light.” Treating a sexual‑intimacy issue like a copier‑sales objection is not just simplistic; it’s inappropriate.

The “never apologize for things outside your control” rule is another miss. He frames it as professionalism, but it reads more like emotional distancing. In real leadership or cross‑functional work, acknowledging someone’s reality is not the same as apologizing for it. He doesn’t seem to know the difference.

If you want a nostalgic tour of old‑school persuasion thinking, this might scratch the itch. If you’re looking for anything remotely applicable to complex organizational communication, modern leadership, or actual human relationships, keep moving.

REVIEW: How to Change Minds: The Art of Influence Without Manipulation by Rob Jolles

RATING: 2-stars

Tuesday, June 09, 2026

REVIEW: Coffeeshop in an Alternate Universe by C.B. Lee (3-stars)

Another YA fantasy novel from my Hugo reading list, this one came in at a hefty 400 pages – still significantly less than some other nominees in this category, and unlike several of its Lodestar competitors, it has the structural discipline to resolve its central conflict within one book instead of leaving cliffhangers dangling across a trilogy. That's worth noting upfront and worth crediting.

The overall plot is a fun idea: a nerdy overachiever who plays D&D stumbles through a portal into a coffeeshop in a magical alternate universe and meets a swoon-worthy peer. The concept of overlap between the two worlds is genuinely enjoyable worldbuilding — imagine a Target where some of the merchandise is magical, and coffeeshops that serve tonics that create psychological or emotional boosts rather than just sugar and caffeine. The sapphic romance between the leads is sweet and the misunderstandings and stakes of teen dating are a fun read, even if they occasionally feel like they're being viewed through an adult hindsight/idealization lens.

The standout worldbuilding details are the ones C.B. Lee commits to fully: a dragon that's been minified and treated like a pampered chihuahua is an absolute delight, and a cat named Fancy who gets swapped to the size of a VW bus is the kind of chaotic detail that deserved a full resolution and doesn't quite get one. I could read an entire children's book about Fancy and the dragon negotiating their size-swap situation. The dragon is very smug about the arrangement. Fancy is not.

The book does have some consistent YA pacing problems. There are sections that run long — oversleeping, clothing, hair — that could have been cut without losing anything. The actual coffeeshop features less prominently than the D&D elements, which feels like a missed opportunity given the title. The evil villain is glaringly obvious from early on, which deflates some of the suspense. And the book has a tendency to re-explain things that didn't need re-explaining, which slows the momentum in the middle sections.

The child ritual sacrifice in the alt world is handled lightly enough that it functions more as a stakes-raiser than genuine darkness — though readers sensitive to that framing should know it's there. Content warning accordingly.

What saves the book is the climax and resolution. The "Counterpart"-style solution — sanctioned gateways between the two alternate universes, with each world able to leverage the strengths of the other — is genuinely satisfying and optimistic in a way that a lot of portal fantasy isn't. It earns its ending. The food descriptions throughout are also fantastic, even when they're doing some of the same over-explaining work as the rest of the middle.

For a Lodestar nominee, this is a solid mid-tier read. It's fun, it's sapphic, it has a chihuahua dragon and a VW bus-sized cat, and it closes its own loop. In a category where some nominees require you to commit to 1,200 pages across three books just to be informed, that counts for something.


REVIEW: Coffeeshop in an Alternate Universe by C.B. Lee
RATING: 3-stars

Monday, June 08, 2026

RECIPE: Meyer Lemon–Limoncello Vegan Sourdough Semolina Cake

 Overnight batter · add leaveners tomorrow · bakes in ring molds or a bundt

This cake came together one afternoon when I had Meyer lemons on the counter, a small bottle of homemade limoncello that my neighbor Allison brought me for my birthday in December 2020 — the height of lockdown, and one of those small gifts that somehow perfectly captures a moment, sourdough starter that needed using, and a bundt pan sitting right there. I'd recently come across Maurizio Leo's gorgeous ciambella recipe on The Perfect Loaf (big fan), and it was very much on my mind. His version uses all-purpose flour and eggs — I wanted to make it vegan, and I also wanted to swap in semolina and almond flour for a denser, more custardy crumb.

A word of warning: when you first mix this batter it looks completely wrong. It's extremely liquid — more pancake batter than cake batter, almost crepe-like. Don't panic. That's the point. After 18+ hours in the fridge, the semolina absorbs everything and the batter transforms into something noticeably thicker. The overnight rest is not optional; it's the whole trick.

One more thing: that limoncello has been in my freezer since December 2020, doled out a few tablespoons at a time. Thank you, Allison. It was worth saving.

In the bundt pan, the cake doesn't rise dramatically — it puffs a bit, then settles back down as it cools. The final texture is velvety and smooth, dense in the best way, nowhere near underbaked. Greasing the bundt with coconut oil and a dusting of flour gave the outside a beautiful caramelization that I wasn't expecting and will absolutely be doing again. For my first bake I also layered blueberries in at about three-quarters of the way through filling the pan, then finished with a chocolate ganache and more blueberries on top once it cooled. Highly recommend. Ring molds are next on my list — I think the smaller format will allow the cake to rise higher.



Ingredients

Wet ingredients — mix tonight
  • 1 cup (200 g) sugar
  • 1 cup (240 g) vegan unsweetened yogurt
  • ½ cup (120 g) sourdough starter, unfed, 100% hydration
  • ½ cup (120 ml) neutral oil
  • Zest of 2 Meyer lemons
  • 3 tbsp fresh Meyer lemon juice
  • 2–3 tbsp limoncello
  • 1 tsp vanilla extract
Dry ingredients — mix tonight
  • ¾ cup (90 g) semolina
  • ½ cup (50 g) almond flour
  • ¼ tsp fine salt
Leavening — add tomorrow
  • 1 tsp baking powder
  • ½ tsp baking soda

Instructions

Tonight — mix and rest
  1. In a large bowl, whisk together the sugar, yogurt, sourdough starter, oil, lemon zest, lemon juice, limoncello, and vanilla until smooth.
  2. In a separate bowl, whisk together the semolina, almond flour, and salt.
  3. Add the dry ingredients to the wet and fold or whisk until just combined.
  4. Cover and refrigerate overnight to hydrate the semolina and bloom the lemon flavor.
Tomorrow — add leaveners and bake
  1. Preheat the oven to 350°F (175°C). For a bundt pan/ring mold -- grease generously with coconut oil and dust with flour — this produces a lovely caramelized crust. 
  2. Remove the batter from the fridge and whisk briefly to loosen. It will have thickened considerably overnight.
  3. Add the baking powder and baking soda and whisk until fully incorporated.
  4. Pour about three-quarters of the batter into the prepared pan. If adding blueberries, scatter a handful evenly over the surface now, then pour the remaining batter over the top.
  5. Bake 28–40 minutes, checking at 28. The cake will puff during baking, then settle back a little as it cools — this is normal. It's done when a toothpick comes out with moist crumbs (not wet batter).
  6. Cool in the pan for 10 minutes before unmolding. If using ganache and blueberries, add them once the cake is fully cooled.

Optional toppings

  • Blueberry layer: at three-quarters fill, scatter a generous handful of fresh blueberries over the batter, then cover with the remaining batter. They sink in slightly and create little pockets of fruit throughout.
  • Chocolate ganache: equal parts melted dark chocolate and hot plant milk, stirred smooth. Spread over the cooled cake and top with more fresh blueberries.
  • Powdered sugar, dusted simply over the top if you want to keep it unfussy.
  • Meyer lemon syrup: equal parts lemon juice and sugar, simmered briefly until slightly thickened, brushed over the warm cake.

Notes

  • Overnight hydration is what gives this cake its silky, custardy crumb — the semolina and almond flour absorb the wet ingredients slowly in the fridge, which you don't get when you bake right away.
  • Sourdough starter adds moisture and acidity, which is what activates the baking soda the next morning.
  • Limoncello intensifies the lemon aroma without making the cake boozy — don't skip it if you have it.
  • The batter looks wrong at first — extremely liquid, like crepe batter. That's fine. After 18+ hours in the fridge it thickens significantly. Trust the overnight rest.
  • Rise and settle: this cake doesn't shoot up like a sponge. It rises modestly, then condenses slightly as it cools. The final texture is velvety and smooth — not underbaked, just dense and custardy in the best way.
  • Coconut oil + flour for the bundt pan creates a noticeably caramelized outer crust. Worth doing even if your pan is non-stick.
  • Ring molds vs. bundt: the bundt works beautifully. Smaller ring molds should bake even more evenly and are easier to portion and transport.